My Three Days in Gilead — Edition Insights

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Authors: Hoenshel, Elmer U. (Elmer Ulysses), 1864- Digital Source: Project Gutenberg Gutenberg Release Year: 2003 First Publication Year: Not confirmed

Key Word: Palestine -- Description and travel Target Reader: Readers of public-domain and historical texts

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A personal travel narrative of three days east of the Jordan, blending descriptive landscape, biblical allusion, and reflective commentary on Gilead's terrain and history.

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Damascus! A city that numbers the years of its existence in millenniums; that witnessed in the dawn of history the migration of Abraham as he went out from Ur to a land not known to him, and to whom she gave one of the best of her sons; that sent out the leper, Naaman, to Palestine for healing and received him back whole; that hailed with great preparations the coming of Elisha, who had previously blinded her army at Dothan; that welcomed Saul of Tarsus in his blindness, restored his sight, and sent him, transformed in his life, to transform Asia Minor and classic Europe. Damascus! A city surviving an age-long struggle with the encroaching desert--a struggle that must go on through ages to come; but, as long as the Abana and Pharpar continue to flow, the sands that would bury her forever in oblivion will be changed into a soil of life-giving and life-sustaining fertility sufficient to support her thousands of inhabitants. Damascus! A city of the long ago, practically unchanged, where the Occidental may look to-day with unfeigned interest upon architecture, costumes, and customs similar to those that prevailed in the East while Greece and Rome were yet young. Damascus! A city celebrated for a thousand years for its bazaars, work-shops, and roses; a city so beautiful thirteen hundred years ago that Mohammed, viewing it for the first time from a distance, is said to have exclaimed: "Man can have but one paradise. My paradise is heaven; I cannot enter yonder city!" a city to-day of unsurpassed beauty, when viewed from the distance, with its white domes and slender minarets rising above the shrubbery and trees of its thirty thousand gardens. Here in this old city; in this historic city; in this beautiful city; in Damascus, I greet you and extend to you an invitation to join me in my proposed trip through Gilead.

My party as yet consists of but two persons. My dragoman, William Barakat, of Jerusalem, in response to a telegram sent from Constantinople, met me several days ago at Beyrout. He is a native Syrian, talks good English, dresses like an American, (save that he wears a red fez,) and is a Christian in faith. Before reaching this city he has already rendered me excellent service. He is intelligent, having attended the American College at Beyrout. I can trust him.

My arrangements with my guide are simple. He is to take me over my desired route by best possible methods of travel; to furnish the best of fare and lodging obtainable; to guarantee me a safe escort; and he is to do all this within a specified time and for a stipulated price. I did not then know how little I was asking as to fare and lodging, but when I knew that he was fulfilling his part of the agreement I had little cause for just complaint.

By early dawn, on October thirtieth, we had breakfasted and had bidden good-by to all the servants about the hotel, (many of whom I did not know to exist, but who, somehow, had learned of me, and had risen thus early to witness my departure and to ask a fee for services that I am quite sure some of them had had no part in rendering,) and had ordered the driver to lose no time in reaching the station of the Damascus-Hauran Railroad, about two miles distant. But, notwithstanding the early hour, the streets were already crowded with people, mules, donkeys, dogs, and other things. It was only with great effort that we could make any headway, and at times it seemed that the crowd, angered at our persistence, would stop us entirely in our struggle to pass through. We did the best we could, but we missed the train. Since there were ONLY THREE TRAINS A WEEK on that road, it meant that I must go back to that same hotel and spend two more days in Damascus at the rate of ten dollars a day, and then, again, on leaving, must fee those same servants for service that I did not want, and, generally speaking, did not get. But, though the disappointment was great, it brought additional opportunity to study the wonders and ways of the wonderful city wherein I was forced to remain.

A second time my dragoman prepares food for our journey; and again, on the morning of November first, we hurry to the station. This time we do not miss the train--we wait for it--and we wait a long time; but with the waiting there is contentment, for, if the train move south, I, too, am sure of going.

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Hoenshel opens his account with a frank confession: after twenty years of anticipation, he traveled alone through Palestine in 1900, deliberately avoiding organized tours. His narrative voice is that of a careful observer who refuses to pose as an archaeologist or historian. He states plainly that he identified no biblical sites, dug into no mounds, and left such work to specialists. This self-imposed limitation gives the text a distinctive character—part travel diary, part personal meditation—as he moves through a region most tourists never saw.

A Solitary Traveler's Voice

The author's decision to travel independently shapes the entire narrative. He notes that in five months he met no former acquaintances, and that every decision was his own. This solitude produces a reflective tone, especially when he describes the landscape. The prose shifts between practical observations—the difficulty of keeping garments from tearing in thick brush—and lyrical passages, such as his description of a fountain where "birds and beasts drank undisturbed before man came." The voice is neither scholarly nor sensational; it is the measured account of a man who values the experience itself over any academic discovery.

Biblical Landscape as Living Terrain

Hoenshel does not treat the Bible as a static text. When he reaches the "wood of Ephraim," he reconstructs the battle of Absalom not as a lesson but as a scene rooted in the physical place. He describes the thickets where Absalom's hair caught in an oak, then quotes N. P. Willis's poem at length, allowing the poetry to carry the emotional weight. The effect is layered: the reader sees the terrain, recalls the biblical event, and then encounters a nineteenth-century poetic response. This method recurs throughout, blending geography, scripture, and literary tradition without forcing a single interpretation.

Pace and the Rhythm of Travel

The narrative moves in deliberate stages. Hoenshel marks time by the day's progress: morning departure, midday rest at a spring, afternoon arrival at a village. When he reaches Coefrinje in mid-afternoon, he stops because "it is too far to the next village to risk going." This attention to practical constraints—distance, terrain, daylight—gives the account a grounded, unhurried rhythm. The prose itself mirrors the pace: long descriptive sentences alternate with short, decisive statements. The reader experiences the journey as a series of measured steps, not a breathless tour.

Hoenshel's narrative rewards readers who are interested in the texture of travel writing from the turn of the century, particularly in regions seldom described. The book's value lies not in its completeness but in its honesty: the author admits what he does not know, and he lets the landscape speak alongside his own reflections. Readers may wish to compare his descriptions with modern accounts of the same area, or to consider how his Protestant perspective shapes his encounter with the Holy Land.

That rainy afternoon, Gilead’s hills felt so close I could almost smell the damp earth, and yet the book kept pulling me eastward, toward Ceylon’s spice-scented air. I found myself wondering how different wandering feels when you’re rooted only to weather, so I picked up Eight Years' Wanderings in Ceylon — Text and Context. It was a quiet, sideways turn, and the rain never stopped.